Monday, March 25, 2013

plummet


(This poem is featured in my collection Unmuzzled, Unfettered)

2 comments:

Nancy Chen Long said...

Oh my, but this is exquisite, the haiku-captured imagery that transports the reader like flight, until last three stanzas, with their own heaviness like an ocean. It takes my breath away.

Mary Bast said...

Thanks, Nancy. I especially respect your comments because your own poetry is so beautiful and sophisticated.